A walk in the park!

For writing the last few weeks my writing group has been writing about a video our teacher Mrs Jack showed us. First we watched the video and put some notes down. Next I went onto video notes to do my plan. Then after we did our plan the next day we started our writing but some people didn't they were learning how to do complex sentences. Then the next day I was learning how to do complex sentences. Then when 1 day had passed I was learning how to do speech marks. I hope you like my writing.

Yelled by who now’s “CREEPY BLOODY”!?

On Friday 14th Mrs Jack and Mrs Harris went for a creepy walk in the creepy dark they keeped on walking through the creeps.

Although they started to get the CREEPS, they continued walking into the park.

Until Mrs Harris said, “ The swings are moving by themself”.

Then the standing thing keeped on coming up and down up and down and it keeps on repeating. A while later they were on there way home and they keeped on seeing these very and I mean very scary trees and like they are ghosts they will say,” ooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh”.

After that they started to walk home but then they heard creepy and I mean creepy and they decided to run.

The moon finally came out and it rises higher and higher as they walked home. On the way, we walked pass the playground, and realized that the swing was swinging by itself again.

Then the moon got more and more higher and instead of the swings now it is the seesaws and it keeps on going up and down up and down and it keeps on repeating again and again.

Said aone, “After that when I watched the video I felt Creeped out so much I could not talk”. Then I was so creeped out that I jumped with a positive attitude and ready to make people's day And then I made. Peoples day just saying this is the next week this is more of my writing.

...To Be Continued...